Docs: Tips touchup

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 # 'static super-powers
 
-As discussed earlier `local` resources are given `'static` lifetime in `#[init]` and `#[idle]`,
-this can be used to allocate an object and then split it up or give the pre-allocated object to a
-task, driver or some other object.
-This is very useful when needing to allocate memory for drivers, such as USB drivers, and using
-data structures that can be split such as [`heapless::spsc::Queue`].
+In `#[init]` and `#[idle]` `local` resources has `'static` lifetime.
 
-In the following example an [`heapless::spsc::Queue`] is given to two different tasks for lock-free access
-to the shared queue.
+Useful when pre-allocating and/or splitting resources between tasks, drivers
+or some other object.
+This comes in handy when drivers, such as USB drivers, need to allocate memory and
+when using splittable data structures such as [`heapless::spsc::Queue`].
 
-[`heapless::spsc::Queue`]: https://docs.rs/heapless/0.7.5/heapless/spsc/struct.Queue.html
+In the following example two different tasks share a [`heapless::spsc::Queue`]
+for lock-free access to the shared queue.
 
+[`heapless::spsc::Queue`]: https://docs.rs/heapless/0.7.5/heapless/spsc/struct.Queue.html
 
 ``` rust
 {{#include ../../../../examples/static.rs}}